Basicly the title says it all, i would like you to criticize the video and how i could have done it better. This is my real first introduction, the other was just smashing stuff together, this one took me 2 hour to build up, ( i knew basicly nothing with that new program and i took over 45min to search a decent music background royalty free ).
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HiwFwRfPV4M&feature=youtu.be
I hope it suits everybody 
P.S.: El Chialeux will be my new youtube name im switching back to french because well, my english isnt good when comes time to talk, it doesnt sound professional. It mean "The ranter" basicly, but with less negative background than ranter.