Posts by dedecou

    FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
    So since you have to rewrite, i have one ideia for you. Remove the lovers of the 9 Chapter.
    If there is going to be a romance you could write Ardan in love with other people, like Cyra.

    I think that he didn't like of that pair, Ardan and Srazih.
    If the Chapter II is finished, why do you torture me, only releasing one part per day? :(

    Why there are so few people that read your story?
    I think that you write very well, aside from the grammatical errors.

    But you should...
    If you used RPG Maker, i think you could do wonders with it, and your story is very good.

    Well what about have factory in industrial craft?
    We have power generator ,advanced armor and other thing but no way to truly build a automatized factory.I think that something like buildcraft , but it uses energy.
    Sorry for my bad english.