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FUCKWINDOWS.

I knew I had missclicked somewhere, but I didn't realise it goddamn killed Chapter 5 to 17 with the old version...

Lost the whole rewritten progress up to that point, which is quite the worst thing possible, because it most likely means I have to rewrite everything past Chapter 10 AGAIN (it's impossible to write the same story from scratch twice, means even rewriting the lost chapters will create something different which doesn't fit well with the story continuing from part 18 ).

Means no storys for the next couple of days/weeks until I've managed to fix up the story. AGAIN

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So since you have to rewrite, i have one ideia for you. Remove the lovers of the 9 Chapter.
If there is going to be a romance you could write Ardan in love with other people, like Cyra.

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Probably, but just as TDC shows: Evil is goooood

Only for the one that is doing it .

Edit:

You didn't release a new part today, to torture us the reader didn't it?

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Because it gives me a few weeks of free time I can spend on other things, without letting readers down without revealing new parts.

And seriously, where would be the fun if you could everything at once

Alblaka is evil. :evil:

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Mind explaining more detailed what exactly is getting you that upset?

The fact that there's a romance in the story?

The few implicitely mature lines? I mean hell, that alone wouldn't even be enough to get the story a real M rating by itself. Unless you missinterpreted some lines for something else... Which was your filthy mind then, not my writing XD

In case you complain about the "suddenness" of their love, you should do two things: At first, consider the fact love isn't something predictable. Secondly, throughout the past story there are enough hints at Srazih and Ajan/Ardans relationship going deeper then just 'friends'. Though Ajan didn't notice much due to him being busy with Rihukan inside of him and Srazih was much more caught up by her role of family to 'lil cubby'. Both of these things sort of lost their effect on Chapter II.

As of current, Chapter II is finished. I don't see much issues about that part of the plot (yet?) and unless there's a major uproar amongst my readers I will prefer not to change various parts throughout the whole chapter.

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I think that he didn't like of that pair, Ardan and Srazih.
If the Chapter II is finished, why do you torture me, only releasing one part per day?

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With each chapter this sounds more like an RPG Game :D. If you give your ok I'll give it a go until College starts in September. Got nothing to do anyways :D.

You will do it with RPG Maker?
If so, then i can help you.

It's going very nice the story.
In the last chapther it says that the twelve most powerfuls Demons/Angels form a council in each kingdom and the most powerful is the "King", aside from that, do there is a ranking depending from power?

Well, i am liking more the Chapter 2 than the first one, it is because you are not doing the cliche that demons are evils and angels are good.

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So far, no. But if you insist to bother me with it, I may add the rule

Btw, 202 downloads on the Chapter I package... omg, that's like 20 times the amount of views/downloads I usually get :O

It even surpasses the amount of sold books of my published novel.

Thanks for the implicit motivation :3

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Why there are so few people that read your story?
I think that you write very well, aside from the grammatical errors.

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I've currently revised the first ten parts of the second chapter, filling in a few minor gaps and are probably going to rewrite everything starting from 11.

Chapter could most likely turn out a fair bit longer then the first one ^^'

Btw, don't think you will have any bartender scenes anytime soon, though

If I wouldn't be disliking RPGs for the sake of them just not fitting my niche, I would probably write one myself.

Overall the given world is quite well suited for RPGs... In case somebody did notice, so far ALL of my fantasy-themed non-earth storys take place in the same world... though scattered across quite a few thousand years. (I should definitely write the one novel regarding the creation of Darakeyn at some point)

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But you should...
If you used RPG Maker, i think you could do wonders with it, and your story is very good.

Hey Alblaka, when are you going to update it?

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think i see where you are going but i have seen something similar and alblaka said that you could use buildcraft instead. it would be nice though.

But ic is much better and it's industrial craft and i don't see any industry.
And buildcraft works with ic?

Well what about have factory in industrial craft?
We have power generator ,advanced armor and other thing but no way to truly build a automatized factory.I think that something like buildcraft , but it uses energy.
Sorry for my bad english.

And what about this design:
http://test.vendaria.net/index…HHHCCCCHCHCHHCHCHCCHCHCHC
Is better than the first one?

Well i tried to do a 6 chambers mark 1 reactor but i don't know if it will work.

This is the reactor i made:
http://test.vendaria.net/index…HUCUCUCCHCHCHUCUCUCCHCHCH
Is there any better design that i could use?