well based on the experience from hundreds and hundreds of stories, next step will be to face these "things".
eizo (interesting choice in name btw) will fight them, bla bla bla.
(hhmmmm yep next time i will also name my charakter after a rather famous monitor manufacturer...)
but as Alblaka has written this story, this aint gonna happen.
(or maybe it is ? and thats the way you want to troll us?)
so my assumption is:
he is eager to face and (fight just wildly assuming they are evil) them but gets distracted by something.
either way i look forward to the release of the second chapter.
( maybe you are waiting for someone to start the discussion to publish the next stuff)
dont worry
i love your writing style, and as of now this story isnt dissapointing. ( even though i know only 3 pages)
EDIT:
read the next part,
is every site a chapter?
or am i misstaking "As well, please keep in mind that the first few chapters aren't exactly full of action or anything suchlike, but be assured that the interesting chapters will come very soon. " with:
pfff just uplaod 5 sites with fighting, yea cliffhanger all the way, so guaranteed is that there is atleast 2 more pages of fighting next upload.??
so you are going the "manga" way off fighting, let the charakter yell out there attacks when they use them, so you can spare some more text? 
The forum is REALY going slow currently, execpt Gregtech and nuclear stuff, but even the nukers are in a kind of winter sleep.
so dont worry i bet when the forum gets a bit more active againy your audience will increase again.
i dont want to make a monolog with alblaka.
we need more people discussing.
