Gregtech 1.7.10 Tutorials

Good that your tried to make a tutorial, but please turn down obnoxiousness. With all that unnecessary camera movement it becomes really hard to watch.
Tutorials needs to be informative, unfortunately I couldn't finish watching since your camera movement quickly putted me off.

If you make presentation less obnoxious then your tutorials will be significantly more watchable.

Ill try to finish watching later, so I can make a more objective review of your efforts, but currently I am not able too.

I applaud the efforts, and subscribed to see how you improve.

I'll give you some constructive criticism:

• Don't use in-game signs. Instead, write everything you're going to say on paper then go through it methodically.
  
• Keep it short. I liked the length, but theoretically you should need no more than 3 minutes depending on the topic.
  
• Keep camera steady.
  
• Use jump cuts. You don't need too much by the way of fancy editing, just cut out the unnecessary bits- keep it moving at a rapid pace.

I hope you stick to it, and I can't wait for more

I do like the new video
Nice work dude

Quote from mightydanp

Any more suggestions

Hmm... maybe not showing crafting onscreen? If you want, you can screenshot it and overlay it (pretty much all video editors allow this, including moviemaker and iMovie):
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gCScuk3NV4I#t=140

See the top left corner.

Other than that, I guess just keep at it and feel confident

Quote from mightydanp

I studdedered alot it took me 12 redoes. I got one nearly perfect so i edited out some of it and came up with that. I have a quistion though. When i am showing the crafting recipes om the screen should i just explaim the itwm or block or just describr the crafting recipient

Don't describe the crafting, just say to look it up in NEI- you're insane if you play Gregtech without NEI anyway
Or maybe you could just put text onscreen saying what the item is, so they can look it up in NEI. People use NEI, so recipes are less of an issue than what the items actually do (which is what the tutorial is for anyway). Putting text might actually be easier than using some king of image.

Just floating some ideas, if you want to use them. I made some mockups if you want, and I can make more if you want to actually use them in future videos.

Keep up a good job.
Tutorials for GT are badly needed for many people.