Mind explaining more detailed what exactly is getting you that upset?
The fact that there's a romance in the story?
The few implicitely mature lines? I mean hell, that alone wouldn't even be enough to get the story a real M rating by itself. Unless you missinterpreted some lines for something else... Which was your filthy mind then, not my writing XD
In case you complain about the "suddenness" of their love, you should do two things: At first, consider the fact love isn't something predictable. Secondly, throughout the past story there are enough hints at Srazih and Ajan/Ardans relationship going deeper then just 'friends'. Though Ajan didn't notice much due to him being busy with Rihukan inside of him and Srazih was much more caught up by her role of family to 'lil cubby'. Both of these things sort of lost their effect on Chapter II.
As of current, Chapter II is finished. I don't see much issues about that part of the plot (yet?) and unless there's a major uproar amongst my readers I will prefer not to change various parts throughout the whole chapter.