The Demonlord Chronicles - Discussion

  • Hey Alblaka, when are you going to update it?

    Just a Question: Is that "Ask for Releasedate = Ban"-Rule also applying to your Stories?

    I don't say, your "insert whatever" is bad. I'm only showing ways for making it better.
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    Patreon really helps me out. If you consider funding the development of GT, so I might be able to do it fulltime, why not?
    GregTech 6, the Main Thread, Bug Reports go here too.
    I'm also on #gt-dev on irc.esper.net, if you don't want to make a Forum account just to contact me.
    (I'm there almost every day, when I'm at my own computer. Yes you can drop bugs and suggestions there too)

  • Just a Question: Is that "Ask for Releasedate = Ban"-Rule also applying to your Stories?

    Probably :D

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  • Just a Question: Is that "Ask for Releasedate = Ban"-Rule also applying to your Stories?


    So far, no. But if you insist to bother me with it, I may add the rule :P


    Btw, 202 downloads on the Chapter I package... omg, that's like 20 times the amount of views/downloads I usually get :O
    It even surpasses the amount of sold books of my published novel.


    Thanks for the implicit motivation :3

  • And it is 3times more downloads then the individual parts. Thus keep putting up whole capters / parts ;). Looks like this community is a lazy one :D


    FarFar


  • Why there are so few people that read your story?
    I think that you write very well, aside from the grammatical errors.

  • All about becoming known. There are billions of books, only a few of those get actually popular, though thousand more are actually worth it.


    I have the secret hope of every reader of TDC telling other people about it, spreading the word of my storys. May I will somewhen achieve a degree of writer fame which permits me to publish a book without going into the red numbers because of it ^^'
    My goal for TDC is too complete the whole trilogy (which will in the end hit about 300 pages, i think), as well as having at least 1k people who read the story (which is hard to measure, though). We'll see whether I achieve my goal :3


    Btw, the goal for my published book was "The time I spent writing the story was well used if I manage to enlighten just one persons life." I won't tell you the details, but I can assure you I've achieved that goal (to my own suprise, actually) :3

  • Well, i am liking more the Chapter 2 than the first one, it is because you are not doing the cliche that demons are evils and angels are good.

  • Well, i am liking more the Chapter 2 than the first one, it is because you are not doing the cliche that demons are evils and angels are good.


    Hehe, I promise you that cliche will not appear in this story, quite the opposite :P

  • Hah, managed to reach Part VXI again, after running though the whole Chapter rewriting stuff.
    In the end there was a lot of spellchecking, adding a few words or even paragraphs all amongst the pages, as well as changing some plot-relevant elements.
    Two parts of the second chapter got cut down entirely, and two new parts got added.


    I'm MUCH more comfortable with the new storyline and look forward to proceed writing it. :3


    Stay tuned for a slow but steady release of new parts...

  • Owwww, good news :3 I found a fitting spot to insert the tale of Darakeyns creation into the actual plotline, which could very well be worth an own 4-pages novel. Bad news, it's chapter #24, which probably won't be released within the next two weeks :3 Happy waiting.

  • It's going very nice the story.
    In the last chapther it says that the twelve most powerfuls Demons/Angels form a council in each kingdom and the most powerful is the "King", aside from that, do there is a ranking depending from power?

  • With each chapter this sounds more like an RPG Game :D. If you give your ok I'll give it a go until College starts in September. Got nothing to do anyways :D.

  • With each chapter this sounds more like an RPG Game :D. If you give your ok I'll give it a go until College starts in September. Got nothing to do anyways :D.


    You will do it with RPG Maker?
    If so, then i can help you.

  • Al whats with 2-9 WHAT DAFUQ DID I JUST READ!!? :wacko:

    The Truth! (!!!WARNING!!! DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU'RE RELIGIOUS IN ANY WAY!!!)


  • What? :O

    Im like reading and its like the wolven that acted like his mother in the 1st chapter now you got all this s*** where she plays around and etc with ardan in a sexual matter whats wrong with you, you can't just spring something that weird onto people.

    The Truth! (!!!WARNING!!! DO NOT READ THIS IF YOU'RE RELIGIOUS IN ANY WAY!!!)


  • Mind explaining more detailed what exactly is getting you that upset?
    The fact that there's a romance in the story?
    The few implicitely mature lines? I mean hell, that alone wouldn't even be enough to get the story a real M rating by itself. Unless you missinterpreted some lines for something else... Which was your filthy mind then, not my writing XD
    In case you complain about the "suddenness" of their love, you should do two things: At first, consider the fact love isn't something predictable. Secondly, throughout the past story there are enough hints at Srazih and Ajan/Ardans relationship going deeper then just 'friends'. Though Ajan didn't notice much due to him being busy with Rihukan inside of him and Srazih was much more caught up by her role of family to 'lil cubby'. Both of these things sort of lost their effect on Chapter II.


    As of current, Chapter II is finished. I don't see much issues about that part of the plot (yet?) and unless there's a major uproar amongst my readers I will prefer not to change various parts throughout the whole chapter.


  • I think that he didn't like of that pair, Ardan and Srazih.
    If the Chapter II is finished, why do you torture me, only releasing one part per day? :(