The Demonlord Chronicles - Discussion

Quote from GregoriusT

Just a Question: Is that "Ask for Releasedate = Ban"-Rule also applying to your Stories?

So far, no. But if you insist to bother me with it, I may add the rule

Btw, 202 downloads on the Chapter I package... omg, that's like 20 times the amount of views/downloads I usually get :O
It even surpasses the amount of sold books of my published novel.

Thanks for the implicit motivation :3

All about becoming known. There are billions of books, only a few of those get actually popular, though thousand more are actually worth it.

I have the secret hope of every reader of TDC telling other people about it, spreading the word of my storys. May I will somewhen achieve a degree of writer fame which permits me to publish a book without going into the red numbers because of it ^^'
My goal for TDC is too complete the whole trilogy (which will in the end hit about 300 pages, i think), as well as having at least 1k people who read the story (which is hard to measure, though). We'll see whether I achieve my goal :3

Btw, the goal for my published book was "The time I spent writing the story was well used if I manage to enlighten just one persons life." I won't tell you the details, but I can assure you I've achieved that goal (to my own suprise, actually) :3

Quote from dedecou

Well, i am liking more the Chapter 2 than the first one, it is because you are not doing the cliche that demons are evils and angels are good.

Hehe, I promise you that cliche will not appear in this story, quite the opposite

Hah, managed to reach Part VXI again, after running though the whole Chapter rewriting stuff.
In the end there was a lot of spellchecking, adding a few words or even paragraphs all amongst the pages, as well as changing some plot-relevant elements.
Two parts of the second chapter got cut down entirely, and two new parts got added.

I'm MUCH more comfortable with the new storyline and look forward to proceed writing it. :3

Stay tuned for a slow but steady release of new parts...

Owwww, good news :3 I found a fitting spot to insert the tale of Darakeyns creation into the actual plotline, which could very well be worth an own 4-pages novel. Bad news, it's chapter #24, which probably won't be released within the next two weeks :3 Happy waiting.

Except for the 12 most powerful immortals forming their respective council, there is no further real ranking.

Sure, feel free to meddle around some. PM me if you need some more stuffing out or have similar content-related questions.

What? :O

Mind explaining more detailed what exactly is getting you that upset?
The fact that there's a romance in the story?
The few implicitely mature lines? I mean hell, that alone wouldn't even be enough to get the story a real M rating by itself. Unless you missinterpreted some lines for something else... Which was your filthy mind then, not my writing XD
In case you complain about the "suddenness" of their love, you should do two things: At first, consider the fact love isn't something predictable. Secondly, throughout the past story there are enough hints at Srazih and Ajan/Ardans relationship going deeper then just 'friends'. Though Ajan didn't notice much due to him being busy with Rihukan inside of him and Srazih was much more caught up by her role of family to 'lil cubby'. Both of these things sort of lost their effect on Chapter II.

As of current, Chapter II is finished. I don't see much issues about that part of the plot (yet?) and unless there's a major uproar amongst my readers I will prefer not to change various parts throughout the whole chapter.